S.E.X.X.Y Paragraphs

My paragraph about this photo on the power of one -
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This film aspect long shot is used effectively because you can see all of people in the jail and If shows the power the Afrikaners have over the Africans.A long is when the camera is further away and shows more than what a close shot would show.The Director did this to show the history between Afrikaners and Africans , who had the most power between the two.It would make the audience feel a bit of sorrow for the Africans since they don’t have much power and can’t fend for themselves. This aspect can be compared to at the start of the movie when it shows the view of his home where he was born.

This film aspect close up shot was used cleverly because It shows what the Afrikaners could do to the African and not get in trouble.We see this when the black prisoner is all bashed up by the guard.The purpose of this was to show what used to happen in apartheid.This made the audience feel bad for what the prisoner had went through and not like the guard.This aspect can be compared to when P.K was in the boys home and the bully spat on him.

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